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The Enforcer
The Enforcer by @Crash (Charlie Stadele)

Its Miroku. Angry. In a forest. What else need be said?

This was drawn not long after the other Miroku-in-action shot, and is an improvement on just about every level. The posing is more dynamic (and original!) the face less cartoony, the expression more threatening, etc. The only points of annoyance are the background and the coloring. The background was an un-thought-out experiment in making a stylized bamboo forest. It could have been better. I also flubbed the coloring. The green streak on Miroku's face was supposed to be a patch of green leaf-filtered light, but in reality it looks more like a very odd grass stain. But I still like this one.

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20y262d ago
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