@Jinx
Catherine Fitzsimmons

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Posted: Monday, 11 August, 2003 @ 01:52 PM

This is really good... The colours fit very well and it somehow reminds me of myself.

The only thing that bothers me is the head/neck. He doesn't seem to be that very sad, rather like he's thinking; "I WILL see you again." But if that is what you wanted it to look like, that's fine with me. XD I just personally think that he could be looking a little bit sadder =)

Posted: Tuesday, 12 August, 2003 @ 06:20 PM

Hmm. You indeed have a way of drawing long necks, but I honestly can't say it's an anatomy problem. All of the characters you draw have a longer neck than usual, and according to that it is called a style.

And styles are a personal taste, which cannot really be judged, actually. XD

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