This is a beautiful image. *never ever comments on anything O.o)
I think that it's the left eye that's off rather than the right (meaning her left eye and our right and I just confused myself...). The arm comming at us is a bit off, but you've done it better than I could. Foreshortening is hard! Since this is just pencil work (I think?) it could be easily fixed, but it won't destroy anything if you don't ^^
Anyway, I admire you! This is a pose most people cannot pull of well! I'll be watching you. spooky music
wags her ass in the air like a tail and squeals i didnt know yu were on side7. stalks you on DA but that bastard site banned me cuz of my ISP...shakes fist anyways, nice sketch. nice sketch. very clean, crisp lines. i like it.