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Jan Ahuis

Ascent to the liquid sky,fixed & colored
Ascent to the liquid sky,fixed & colored by @Ian (Jan Ahuis)

T(N) - Artistic nudity. I fixed the errors I made and gave it a coloring.She is floating in water not blue soda pop.I tried to be a bit more bold in my shading.This is more about coloration and shading than about anatomy.

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Posted: Wednesday, 10 September, 2003 @ 10:12 AM

This is definetly really beautiful. NO, it doesn't look like she's in blue soda pop! I really love the soft shading on this. And the title just ROCKS. Her peaceful expression is so beautiful.

Posted: Saturday, 11 October, 2003 @ 12:31 PM

Wow, great job on this, I really like the uplifted expression, the pose, and the general floatiness in, uh, general. O_o (Blue soda pop? XD ) The anatomy looks great and the markings are really interesting, only thing I can point out is that her feet look a little too small for her body heh =) But other than that, great job. =D

Posted: Sunday, 09 November, 2003 @ 03:22 PM

Ah, a truly peaceful picture, just luking at it. That's a great effect you caused, be proud :D

I think people have alread pointed out the mite problems in this picture, so I don't need to do that. The angle of which she is floating is nice, I really like her expression. The spot pattern is nice on her fur, overall your character is cool, drawn right, just certain things out of preportion. Nice artwork ;)

Posted: Friday, 12 December, 2003 @ 02:13 AM

Wonderful work on the water, and the pose is very expressive. keep up the great work.

Posted: Monday, 05 January, 2004 @ 05:35 PM

stunning...absolutely stunning...bravo

Posted: Tuesday, 27 January, 2004 @ 06:17 PM

Ooooo, pretty, and no it doesn't look like she's floating around in blue soda pop.

^_^

Posted: Tuesday, 27 January, 2004 @ 08:10 PM

I like it too, no to the blue soda pop and yeah ...

I know that you said it's more about coloration and shading and stuff but I think the positions of the hands needs to change ... it doesn't look exactly right.

But I still really like it, it's very awesome!

Posted: Tuesday, 02 March, 2004 @ 07:04 PM

Wow awsome! Love the vidrent Color.

Posted: Friday, 30 April, 2004 @ 08:15 PM

Ooooooh...so pretty, I love her expression! She look so peaceful :)

Posted: Thursday, 13 May, 2004 @ 11:49 AM

This is a very nice picture!!! I love how you use the colors. and how it looks real!^_^

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Posted: Friday, 04 June, 2004 @ 01:20 AM

Wow, a very nice Anthro. One of the better one's I've seen around here. Her exspression is also very well done. Great job!

Arms seem a little stiff though

Posted: Saturday, 05 June, 2004 @ 07:25 AM

Thanks ! The stiffness is a general problem I have when drawing characters. Only extensive pratice will fix that I guess.

Posted: Monday, 21 June, 2004 @ 03:04 AM

This is very beautiful, The coloring, shading, and proportions, everything that i can think of on this is done almost perfectly. Even the water looks very well done, nothing at all like soda. I also like how you did the paw thing on the hands, not everybody does that when doing these types of drawings. Well, good luck with future work.

Sincerely, Ikaika

Posted: Monday, 21 June, 2004 @ 11:22 AM

Oooo, pretty. I don't normally like furry humanoid pics, but this is certainly an exception. She's so lovely!

Posted: Monday, 21 June, 2004 @ 04:45 PM

I agree about her feet, perhaps more human feet would be better or at least a less soft and more severe feet. I think her legs are a bit short since they're supposed to be half the height... uh... of a human i mean. And the arms could sway back a little for more drama and flow not that this picture is lacking any of it or course. But for the hands they should be relaxed. The fingers of a relaxed hand curve inward slightly. I love that u went a bit bolder on shading! It's great and i think I need to be bolder with shading to.

Posted: Wednesday, 30 June, 2004 @ 07:47 AM

LOVELY! I see why you made this your sample picture. The lineart and colouring are awsome, the expression makes it seem so beautiful. Its a bit weird for a cat to be enjoying water, but its an anthro, and it could be a special cat ^^; I can't point out anything wrong with this picture, its so great!

Posted: Wednesday, 30 June, 2004 @ 11:03 AM

well the shadding on her skin is absolutely incredible and the rays of light comming into the water... GREAT JOB! KEEP IT UP!

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