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Laura Kershaw

Raphael
Raphael by @Raphaella (Laura Kershaw)

Wow, I did something that didn't luk too bad - well, I have to complain about how I always seem to do the heads wrong, and yes - it IS water he's in. I asked my mum wat she wud give it truthfully outta 10, and she sed 8 coz it dint luk like water. angry sigh i can't draw friggin' water.

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20y225d ago
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Posted: Saturday, 06 March, 2004 @ 06:17 PM

No offense meant here, but IMHO, your mom doesn't know what she's talking about. The water looks good, VERY good, in fact. Keep up the good work.

Personally, I give the pic a 10.

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