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Laura Kershaw

Hy-ya!
Hy-ya! by @Raphaella (Laura Kershaw)

Drawn in the time it took my computer to restart after it had crashed, again. It's Leo, practicing katas as usual. Couple things luk wrong, nothing luks right. shrugs

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20y186d ago
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Posted: Wednesday, 22 October, 2003 @ 03:05 PM

He looks very good really except for the thickness of his arms, central line on his chest plate and one shoulder being biger than the other.

The action is very good and the ribbons whipping around are very stylish. Try to make his arms and shoulders the same size and thickness next time, and centre the rdge on is chest plate and he will look great.

Posted: Wednesday, 22 October, 2003 @ 03:59 PM

Thanks. The reason I ddin't pay too much attention was coz it was only a few minutes worth of drawing. I didn't realize his shoulders were different sizes, oops. I'm never gud at drawing a different pose other than standing, plus I had difficulty with his arms because they were at an angle. Thank you for the comment.

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