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Laura Kershaw

Prida
Prida by @Raphaella (Laura Kershaw)

Developing style - I can't always get her god damn face right, nor anythign else for that matter. So, I'm tryin to draw in more detail than I usually go with. Pic is from Radical Transformation, my story - don't ask what particular scene coz I dont know, heh. Just throught I'd have a go at drawin humans properly - tho, it doesn't luk too humanly - thats prolly becoz it's kinda comic style

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Posted: Sunday, 05 October, 2003 @ 06:11 PM

This pic is really good, but one way to make your face better is to really concentrate on the lips and instead of making them all one piece, make them seperate.

Posted: Sunday, 05 October, 2003 @ 06:13 PM

Thanks for the comment, and the advice, I'll try that next time ;)

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