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Bring Me To Life
Bring Me To Life by @Bliss_Greycloud (The Blissy~)

How can you see into my eyes Like open doors... Leading you down into my core Where I've become so numb... Without a soul My spirit's sleeping somewhere cold.. Until you find it there and lead it back home...

Wake me up inside.. I can't wake up... Wake me up inside.. Save me... Call my name and save me from the dark.. Wake me up... Bid my blood to run.. I can't wake up.. Before I come undone... Save me... Save me from the nothing I've become

Now that I know what I'm without You can't just leave me.. Breathe into me and make me real Bring me to life..

Bring me to life.. I've been living a lie. There's nothing inside.. Bring me to life..

Frozen inside without your touch.. Without your love, darling.. Only you are the life among the dead.

All of this sight.. I can't believe I couldn't see.. Kept in the dark.. But you were there in front of me..

I've been sleeping a 1000 years it seems.. I've got to open my eyes to everything..

Without a thought.. Without a voice.. Without a soul..

Don't let me die here.. There must be something wrong.. Bring me to life..

Bring me to life.. I've been living a lie.. There's nothing inside..

Bring me to life......


"Bring Me To Life" ~Evanescence

Amazing how a song can inspire you..

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20y98d ago
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Posted: Friday, 23 January, 2004 @ 01:49 AM

I absolutely adore what you've done here! I don't think I can describe what's so good about it, so I won't even try. But its wonderful and expressive and it.. kinda glows!

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