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Laura Kershaw

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Cute? Yes Gud coloring? no gud BG? no cute? yes

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Fan Art - Animation/Comic
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Class:
Finished Work
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20y25d ago
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Posted: Tuesday, 30 March, 2004 @ 02:57 AM
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Wow, did you draw this with a mouse? It's very good! I particularly love his face and hair... I think the coloring is excellent! The Evolution-style cel-shading is well represented. I think the background is fine; the only nitpick I have is that the fingers grasping his hand are a bit off.

Posted: Tuesday, 30 March, 2004 @ 10:33 AM
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Thank you - and yeah, I just realized his fingers do luk a little weird. Damn. Yeah, drawn with a mouse; the lines aren't the smoothest, huh. Thanks again for the comment :)

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Posted: Tuesday, 30 March, 2004 @ 09:45 AM
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I think you did a beautiful job with this! The shading is awesome -- I really like how you did his hair and the folds in his shirt. And I think the BG fits the pic perfectly. Good work!

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