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Laura Russell

No Use Cryin (The Very Surface of Cosmopolitan Earth)
No Use Cryin (The Very Surface of Cosmopolitan Earth) by @wolfvayne (Laura Russell)

"Today was the beginning of a new place Themed blue and oxygenated bubbles With a giant timer fizzling down To an ardent swapping of waves.

I thought as these fungal skies pass About feelings of warmth and the joyous Rendering of shine and shrewdness And mostly the way my horrorscope Came true that week.

Slowly, the leaves erode my skull Loosening old tendons into new ways And, with tortion, supplying me With the very best of needles.

Here I sit dreaming and nodding In fake iambic pentameter; Accompanied by unicorns, Elves and glowy fae twinkling Atop the mystical abd mysterious Incantation, depression, witchery, beauty, Wings, dresses, mussings, blooming clichés."

[poem by moi] I started this aeons ago. In my 15 mins between an hour of study for the last month, I doodled at it and it just so happened that I finished it this weekend while reciting Macbeth to myself. It's goddamn huge; 12 X 24. I have alot to say about it - even though the poem above conveys it all pretty well. Let's just say...it's a bitter, cruel experiment; the results for which, will hopefully confirm that many spectators are superficial. Anyway... I hope you like it. Details can be found here: http://www.iownthesun.com/art/nousecryin_det.html

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Posted: Thursday, 10 June, 2004 @ 04:28 PM

Wow, this is so surreal, I love it. The colour accents in certain places really enhance the picture. The only thing that looks a little strange is the melting candle type thing in the bottom left corner. I can't tell what it is. Other than that the piece is flawless. Great work.

Posted: Thursday, 10 June, 2004 @ 05:56 PM

Absolutely amazing. I love the colour (and the lack of it) For some reason it reminds me of the book 'Mindplayers' by Pat Cadigan. A silly thing to be reminded of, though.

The only suggestion I can offer is that almost everything seems unnaturally smooth. Although, for all I know it could be intended; it's certainly not a very realistic piece in the first place.

Also, it says the image is for sale, but I can't seem to find any information on your website. Don't think I could afford it right now anyway, but it's certainly something I would like to have on my wall.

Excellent work!

Posted: Sunday, 01 August, 2004 @ 05:15 AM

Amazing!, I've fallen over from being bowled over by it, it's breathtaking.

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