i would shade the arms if i could shade.. but i was afraid to ruin it because of my complete lack of ability to shade.. which line? gosh this is going to get confusing.. the one on the inside of the bend or on the outside of the bend? if u know what i mean? id like to change it so please tell me! thank u for your v helpful comment:D i love when people comment! it makes me improve:D
abia geisha- love to lottie by @pippilee162 (lee anderson)
yayness.. nu char ^^ her name is Abia Geisha. shes quite pretty ..
shes not really the happiest of chars.. infact most of the time she wnt b rated E.. but nm , the story will unfold. dam me and my lack of ability to shade :( i stil like this nehoo
comments and critiques will be glady recieved and highly rated!
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Posted: Friday, 16 July, 2004 @ 05:41 AM
Wow, your stuff is amazing!! I especially like this (i swear i have a shirt the same as the one whe is wearing, lol!) and also the one of your "Fallen Angel" and your friend Louise. You have done a wonderful job on colour here, it's so vibrant in the background, it really makes her stand out being as pale as she is. You also have a great technique for people! I won't touch people usually, but the way you put expression inot them just blows me away.
By the way, the maths book ones are good too. Kinda reminds me of my psychology lectures.. didn't learn much, but i got some great art out of it!
Posted: Wednesday, 04 August, 2004 @ 06:50 PM
omg im so sorry its taken so long to reply! i remember gettin the email saying i had received a comment and i think it must have slipped my mind to actuali reply to it o_0
coming from an artist as developed as your self.. im chuffed with ur comment :D im reaaaaali glad you like my work, heh, an i usuali fail at most things that arent people so.. ya know :P
also glad u can connect with the maths book stuff.. boredom seems to bring out the best work in me. especiali when mrs.ludlow is ther trying to make me do boring maths...
I like the texture in the hair, not even the shininess so much, but the strands. I think some shading on the arms wouldn't be uncalled for and this might just be my brain but her left arm, the one on the right looks backwards and I think it is just because of that tiny line, I think it's too curved and it looks more like an elbow that way then a bend in the arm. This is very nit-picky, I still like the piece, it is very nice.