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Catherine Fitzsimmons

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Picture 2 of the catgirl calendar! Which means I'm more serious about this than most of my other projects, heh. Stay tuned, if I want to finish this on time I should be uploading a new one at least every four days.

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Posted: Tuesday, 02 November, 2004 @ 07:17 AM
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She's so cute! I love the coloring. It is so smooth and clean.

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Posted: Tuesday, 02 November, 2004 @ 10:04 PM
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GO JINX! YOU CAN DO IT! I'm really impressed, you've been very prolific lately! More so than me. Keep it up! I hope the Inspiration Faery continues to bash you with her... uhm... whatever she uses to bash inspiration with. Yeah. :;sweatdrop;:

I'm in a really foul mood, so forgive the weirdness and hyperness of this comment. I love her shades. I mentioned that when I first saw the sketch, but I'll mention it again. I wasn't expecting her skin to be such a nice bronze, I'm very impressed at the colors you chose! The bathing suit has a nice pattern, too, and I definetly really like her hair.

The volleyball net is a little too linear, though--I think the composition suffers a bit because of this. Giving it a slight slant might be more visually intriguing. Other than that, I have no complaints. Keep it up, you can do it! Who's next? December? November? June? I'll look forward to it a LOT!

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 02:56 AM
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Nice image and colouring only the tail looks a little off. It looks like it was just pasted on. Tails are usually just and extention of the spine, and are usually a lil lower. Thats it I hope I helped a lil >.<

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 04:21 PM
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well, I think you could lower it more. When you first sketch it, draw a line for the spine down the back. THen continue it out for the tail. Also blend it more. The ears are easy because you can cover it with her hair. but maybe make the tail start with just skin then make hair show up a little further up the tail, or make some of the fur onto her body. >.< Sounds odd but it will make it look more natural, like blended more.

Posted: Wednesday, 15 December, 2004 @ 04:39 PM
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I love her hair, glasses, and bikini best! <(^.^)>

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