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Yaminah Tashanazi

Vampire in a . . . modern style?
Vampire in a . . . modern style? by @chaosmage (Yaminah Tashanazi)

This is just the "lineart" or whatnot. I will start to color when I have more energy. The pencil was just so light on this, really had to mess around with it to get it to show up at all.

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Posted: Monday, 22 August, 2005 @ 10:55 PM

Hope you get around to coloring it soon, but I know what you mean about coloring...it's so tiresome. Anyways, I cannot wait to see the colors. The lineart looks great by the way. All of your lines flow so well and possess a nice sense of movement.

Posted: Monday, 22 August, 2005 @ 11:03 PM

Yeah, this was nice after drawing on the tablet for so long . . . but it looks so much better on paper in real life. T__T

Posted: Wednesday, 24 August, 2005 @ 06:38 AM

XD Wow, this vampire has long hair. I love the pupilless eyes and the teeth, though I miss the streak of blood coming from his mouth that's on your Friends Only pic.

It looks like the knees start too soon, especially considering how long the legs go on after the point.... Also, not sure on this, but the neck kinda looks too skinny on the lower part....

Does he have an earring? It looks like he kinda has one that resembles Hakkai's power limiters. If so, it looks cool. ^__^

Posted: Wednesday, 24 August, 2005 @ 05:53 PM

Like I'd said a long while ago, the idea for the eyes came from that Goth picture by Anni . . . the last name alludes me at the moment. XD I like to leave most additions, like blood out when I scan if I know it's something I'm going to color in Photoshop. You've already seen it's been added. LOL

Yeah . . . I dunno, I struggled with that quite a bit. Though the whole point is to make everything look really long and lanky. Just in my observation of really tall, skinny guys, that's what I came up with. shrugs The neck does look too skinny in just the line art. But partially it's covered by the hair and his body is slightly turned to the side and his neck is even more so because of the position his head's in.

LOL. Originally I had put an earring there. I'd tried to erase it, but that didn't turn out too well, so yeah, it's still there. XD

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