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Vanya w

Assasin
Assasin by @dokuro (Vanya w)

my First upload to this site, Please take care of me <33

this was a gaia online commission, it was of the girls avi, such a cute avi <33

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Posted: Friday, 03 April, 2009 @ 07:50 AM

Welcome to Side 7! That is a cute character. I love the colour of the hair and the shading on it is really nice. The face and body are nicely done, too, though I'm a little uncertain about her right shoulder. If her shoulders are supposed to be at an angle, then her body - i.e. her chest - should be at the same or similar angle. Aside from that, though, this is a really cute picture. That little shadow of outline under her chin adds so much depth to it.

Posted: Friday, 03 April, 2009 @ 03:48 PM
Rating: 3

Love this image. It's very cute, indeed.

I have to agree with Jinx, though. The shoulders and chest seem to be on two different lines (character's right shoulder is higher than the left, but the character's right breast is in line with/slightly below the left) which throws the eye just a bit.

However, the colouring is fantastic, and I love the way you did the hair.

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