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Sara Pike

"Please don't die, please..." by @selanpike (Sara Pike)

This is a scene from chapter fifteen of my MASTERPEICE novella, "Happy now?"! I can't explain what's happening since it's a plot thing and I don't wanna ruin it for those of you who haven't read, but Brian's really sad and scared here, as he desperately runs home... I know the pose looks a little awkward, but I just can't draw people running without them looking awkward. Meeeh. Rated "T" cuz he's got a gun. YAY.

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