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Dual Qyrineg

Sever
Sever by @FireyWolve (Dual Qyrineg)

This poem's from one of my character's point of view, Slit.

They both have weird names, yadda yadda, but it has reasoning behind it that I don't want to go over here.

Yes, he likes another guy and yes the other guy sever likes blood.

But for me, a lot of feelings come through in this poem and it matches Slit great, expecially for rhyming. THe only problem is I made it kinda vague so some may not pick up on the fact that Sever's blind.

Well, whatever, that's it.

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