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the cheese cake is rotting!
the cheese cake is rotting! by @zarathus (zara thus)

today when i got a cheese cake from mcdonalds, the container was slimey and had bits of other cheese cake on it, then when i opened it, it was warm and the out side had hardened and was all yellowish and there was this watery stuff in it at the bottom and the busket was all wet and soggy....it was horrible! actually, i didnt eat it...mum refused to take it back because she was in a hurry, so i fed it to my dog, dusty! and she loved it...even though it was rotting...i hope it didnt poison her!!!

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