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Alice at a Rave
Alice at a Rave by @Alayna (Alayna Lemmer)

I finally finished her! My first CG! I did this for a guy I know at school =] He's gonna use it for banners for a rave in town. Please leave feedback!!

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Posted: Saturday, 19 January, 2002 @ 02:21 AM
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This looks good. I like the coloring.

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Posted: Saturday, 19 January, 2002 @ 03:02 AM
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Great work! The wood texture iw very nicely done and this should make a really cool poster! My only critique would be that her arms seem a little skinny and small compared to her body. Keep working on anatomy a little more. Looks wonderful though! and an impressive first CG!

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Posted: Saturday, 19 January, 2002 @ 11:46 PM
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this is a great drawing and alice is kinda hott... she reminds me of ana a little bit!

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Posted: Sunday, 20 January, 2002 @ 12:07 AM
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Great drawing. I like the coloring. Rays a horn doy. The eyes, and turntable are nicely done. Hands are a bit to small. I like the backround to. A beautiful job

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Posted: Tuesday, 22 January, 2002 @ 10:53 PM
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I love this pic... now only if Alice really looked like this, heh. Your work is great {^^}, don't quit.

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