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Amanda Lien

velociraptor
velociraptor by @alienfirst (Amanda Lien)

Sketch of a velociraptor. I had no reference so the body shape isn't quite right.

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22y144d ago
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Posted: Saturday, 10 November, 2001 @ 04:19 PM

Hmmm, not bad....needs alot of work though....try and mail me, I got a pic of a velociraptor I can send u if u like. Else, it´s good. Head is too short and body too buff.

Posted: Saturday, 10 November, 2001 @ 05:09 PM

Claws need to be longer, and the fingers too. Don't bend the tail sooo much, cause raptors had stiffened tails for balance. I like the face.

Posted: Wednesday, 14 November, 2001 @ 07:41 PM

It needs a longer neck, hmmm what else, well this is only a theroy but they think the were feathered, black head too. And whoever's roght about the tail and the tip needs to get a LOT more thinner. Stable... more stable (sorry i'm picking on it)

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