Interesting character. Very punky and tough looking. I like all the colors in her hair, they're quite captivating. The pose and expression are very expressive, as well. The perspective on the background is a little off, though. We seem to be about eye level with the character, but the background is angled as if the viewer was high above, perhaps even from the ceiling. The corner needs to be at a wider angle with the lines running higher up off the page than they are now, and the window running parallel to the lines to keep the perspective. Also, the boards over the window need to line up at least close to the window itself, and the light bulb would have to be hanging very low in the room for us to be able to see it from here. The legs of the stool are positioned appropriately for the perspective, however. If it helps, connect the stool legs with lines to get an idea of how the square floor is distorted from this angle. You'll notice that you have wide corners and more horizontal lines than you have in the background. Otherwise, it's a nicely drawn picture and interesting character design. Keep it up.
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Interesting character. Very punky and tough looking. I like all the colors in her hair, they're quite captivating. The pose and expression are very expressive, as well. The perspective on the background is a little off, though. We seem to be about eye level with the character, but the background is angled as if the viewer was high above, perhaps even from the ceiling. The corner needs to be at a wider angle with the lines running higher up off the page than they are now, and the window running parallel to the lines to keep the perspective. Also, the boards over the window need to line up at least close to the window itself, and the light bulb would have to be hanging very low in the room for us to be able to see it from here. The legs of the stool are positioned appropriately for the perspective, however. If it helps, connect the stool legs with lines to get an idea of how the square floor is distorted from this angle. You'll notice that you have wide corners and more horizontal lines than you have in the background. Otherwise, it's a nicely drawn picture and interesting character design. Keep it up.