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Elazul Jumi

Red Night
Red Night by @Laprislazulknight88 (Elazul Jumi)

This is Eithene, original character wearing one of those cool outfits that I wish I owned. ;o;

Um, anyway: sketched, scaned, changed the colors of the lines, printed out, inked, scanned, edited, and colored on Photoshop. :3

I don't like the background. ._.;

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19y248d ago
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Posted: Sunday, 12 September, 2004 @ 05:44 PM

Nice details. The intricacies of this costume, right down to the earring and clip in her hair, really stand out in this picture. It's obvious you put a lot of thought into this character's design and it paid off. Personally, I like the background. It has a nice surreal quality to it and the color scheme works with the foreground. The perspective of her left leg is off - it looks like it's too short because of how high up the grass goes - and her right hand is a little small, but otherwise it's nice work. Keep it up.

Posted: Sunday, 12 September, 2004 @ 06:56 PM

Thanks. ^^

Hmm, I guess you're right, it does look too short but it's really not that short ... what I mean is that the grass in the foreground sort of covers it up; I guess I should fix that later. And the right hand is too small ... I guess I overlooked that.

Anyway, thanks again.

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