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Gina Starwell

Almost Human...
Almost Human... by @Shelpup (Gina Starwell)

Tis me lupe Soreld again, except this time i have him in his human form. He's a teenager in this pic. He was cursed at a young age to tranform whenever the full moon was out,... Artwork © Copyright 2002 Gina Starwell

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Posted: Tuesday, 26 November, 2002 @ 08:57 PM

Good coloring. I like both the faces. I must say I fancy the lupe over the human... lol. Sill looks cool though. The right hand (the one on the ground) looks kinda funky. You should still be able to see his pinky, at the way he is holding his hand, the pinky finger shouldn't be hidden at all. His abs down't looks very much like abs I'm sorry to say. and he only has 4 of them. He's also missing his ribs. His pecks take up too much of his top and therefore, he has no ribs at all. It would work better if the line for his pecks were up higher and then he'd look like he has ribs better. I'd work on that if I were you. One of the best things to do to get how the chest/ribs/abs section on a male are, resort to muscle magazines. Though the men are usually WAY big (erg) it is still helpful, cuz they are very well toned, and usually flexing when they post, so you can see the definiton of their muscles. Tis good for a first attmpt of abs I must say. I would keep working at them. I myself didn't actually get very good at them until like a couple months ago that I was like "ah-ha!" Men are harder to draw then women, cuz they have far less cuves and more muscle showing. I still like the lupe better though.. lol. I like his face. ^^ Tis all very cool Dee! Good job on it.

Posted: Tuesday, 26 November, 2002 @ 09:44 PM

Yes i know the abs are weird ^_^i'll try to work on that hehe. But i have to speak for some of this. he has six abs, but the pants cover up the other two. i agree with the hand though. i didn't notice how weird it looked until now --meep-- o wells

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