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Michelle Woolston

...'Til Twilight Falls
...'Til Twilight Falls by @redderz (Michelle Woolston)

Take, just one last dare, Pretend you don't care, Till twilight falls... Wait, there's someone else here, And I can't stop my tears, I've never been so scared...

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Posted: Wednesday, 11 August, 2004 @ 03:29 PM

love da poem love da rabbit, you make it look so easy, yet it is so hard, it is very smooth and looks realistic, ncely done! ^_^

Posted: Thursday, 12 August, 2004 @ 03:46 PM

Actually she's a wolf... ^__^;; But thank you for the nice comment! :3

Posted: Friday, 17 September, 2004 @ 03:37 AM

This is very beautiful, the face is done very well, and with much emotion, and fluidity. I also really like the hair. only probs i would point out, are that the hands are a little too big, and the left ummmm how do i say.... breast...... is too high in comparison to the right. It kinda makes the right one seem like it's sagging, lol. i really like the ears, and the tail. oh yeah, one last thing, the right shoulder comes out just a little bit too far. I really like this pic, very nice job. and i can't believe i just noticed, but the background is wonderful, especially the moon. sorry for writing a book, lol.

Sincerely, Ikaika

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