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Sarava
Sarava by @yazzi (Mezz Delf)

HeeeYA! it's Sarava doing a bit of a crouching tiger, hidden dragon thing as part of a themed art swap over at WF forums. The colours let me down on this one howl -I finally come up with non generic pose and I choose dodgey colours. Oh well, perhaps I'll have a fiddle with the tone of the shadows (as that's what's bothering me).

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Posted: Thursday, 22 May, 2003 @ 12:09 PM

Ha! First comment for me! At any rate... I like the colors, the pose, and the purple bandana thing on its head. Very nice!

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Posted: Monday, 18 August, 2003 @ 12:39 AM

This is a real fun style for you! I like it a lot! might've chosen a darker outline color (dark purple works well for me, though dark brown might've worked better here)....

I'm kind of mixed on the color issue. On one hand, I think the cat's colors are really well-chosen. I also like how you did the tuft of fur at the end (both colorwise and shapewise).

On the other hand, I think the yellow of her shirt-thing blends too much into her sock and belly color--maybe that's what's tripping you a bit.

I really like the near paw. :) Nice details.

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