Hehe, he's just really really tired (stressful job) and fell asleep like this. Someone in my class fell asleep leaning on his arm like this, and while sitting in a chair at the same time - while at school. They'd had an all-night party the day before and they hadn't slept... The teacher didn't even notice. :D Anyway, thanks a lot for your helpful comment! I'll be sure to remember the part about the lines.
Sleeping Scope by @Mel (Melanie Smits)
This is Scope, my first ever furry character. He's originally from a story I will never write, the basic setting was a world with a war between humans and furries, and Scope was the leader of the furry resistance in a particular area. This was drawn with a pencil and colored with OpenCanvas
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Posted: Thursday, 08 January, 2004 @ 02:56 AM
Thanks a lot for commenting! ^^ I don't really remember why I didn't like the story anymore, probably because I was afraid to turn it into too much of a social commentary-type...thing. Oo I don't know, maybe I'll start writing it again. Everyone's saying it sounds interesting, so why not. ^_^;;
Heh, and that sounded like an interesting story, too! He's a cool character--I definetly like his design. The pose you have him in here, makes him look more like he's sitting up on one elbow than sleeping--I think this would be fixed or offset if there were more lines to show where his pillow was. But here, it's kind of like he's dozing, so I like that effect too... Other suggestions I might make would be to use your dark lines more on the inside of the body--you outline everything, but sometimes lines used as details for fur or muscle tones add a lot, you know? I really am impressed with your shading and coloring--the way you did his markings on this are exceptionally impressive. So I'm really looking forward to seeing lots more of your work! (BTW--I'm Li-chan on the message board)