Remus by @linnpott (Linnen Potter)

In my english class I have to write a weekly essay using some vocabulary words. I made up this really lame story and turned it in (I got an A on the essay, but it's impossible to get something less than an A on the essays). I didn't like the essay, but then I started to think more and more about the story and I devolped it into this plot inside my head. So I thought that I would turn this into a comic (along with my other comic projects which I am considering). In any case, here is a design of the main guy, Remus. His design is still in the planning stages, but I'm sure his final look will be something like this (I just think he looks too female-ish...cause he's a guy @_@).