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L.A.Kenji Ishikawa

A bit of relax in the park...--
A bit of relax in the park...-- by @EternalT_Bone (L.A.Kenji Ishikawa)

Joe Iwagami, Chance Furlong and Benji Tsukiyo take a relax time before classtime...

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Posted: Friday, 25 March, 2005 @ 03:36 PM

JAJAJAJ!!! QUE BUEN DIBUJO!!! Ya me gustaría a mi también un poquito de relax!!!! La expresión en la cara de Chance es absolutamente INCREIBLE!!!! TE HA SALIDO GENIAL!!!!!! En cuanto a la parte crítica debería comentarte el tema de la cadena del chico... no se ve que caiga de forma natural.... Al estar tumbado, estaría sin tantos picos y el colgante cerca de su cara, cayendo la cadena por sus hombros, y algo más redondeadamente, sin tantos picos.... De cualquier manera, la cara de Chance se lleva la palma!!!!!!! ENHORABUENA!!!!!!!

Posted: Sunday, 27 March, 2005 @ 04:44 PM

no haga mas...en semana santa sededico a actividades sanas..........................si, segun para algunos fueran sanas......................en fin.......................el dibu le quedo excelente..................................lo unico que falta es a Mikhail con unas hermosas kodachi (espadas, no pelaas) persiguiendolos por medio mundo

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