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Valerie Sloan

Toby
Toby by @sultansgirl (Valerie Sloan)

This is a realistic sketch of my new puppy Toby, I was experiementing with shading as well as drawing him. If anyone has some hints to help me imrpove I would gladly appreciate it. Comments?

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Furry / Anthropomorphic
Rating:
Everyone
Class:
Rough / Concept
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20y160d ago
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Posted: Sunday, 18 January, 2004 @ 11:28 AM
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shading - try more shading around the eys, in the pupil of the eye, the ear and under the chin. adding highlights would pull it all together and add sum 3dism to the pix. Dont be afraid to really press on hard when shading and then gradually tone ti down.

Posted: Sunday, 18 January, 2004 @ 11:35 AM
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Thanks! I'll give it a shot. -scurries off to try it-

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