This picture is great--it brings back tramautic childhood memories. Wow. I really love the expression--you've definetly captured the feeling of sadness in it, and added to the words on the side, the whole loneliness is really apparent. The coloring is very, very well done--overall, this is a very moving image. As for critique, I think the hand should have a little bit more detail in the fingers--the one finger is about perfect, the others don't really seem to be there. A very small thing--everything else is wonderful. Ah--and I really like the lines you used--they help to add to the sad atmosphere.
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What kind of comments is lilT seeking for this piece?
Any Kind - Self-explanatory.
Casual Comments - Comments of a more social nature.
Light Critique - Comments containing constructive suggestions about this work.
Heavy Critique - A serious analysis of this work, with emphasis on identifying potential problem areas, good use of technique and skill, and suggestions for potentially improving the work.
Please keep in mind, critiques may highlight both positive and negative aspects of this work, but the main goal is to constructively help the artist to improve in their skills and execution. Be kind, considerate, and polite.
This picture is great--it brings back tramautic childhood memories. Wow. I really love the expression--you've definetly captured the feeling of sadness in it, and added to the words on the side, the whole loneliness is really apparent. The coloring is very, very well done--overall, this is a very moving image. As for critique, I think the hand should have a little bit more detail in the fingers--the one finger is about perfect, the others don't really seem to be there. A very small thing--everything else is wonderful. Ah--and I really like the lines you used--they help to add to the sad atmosphere.