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Fiona Mellis

Podgy Persian
Podgy Persian by @Fizzlepop (Fiona Mellis)

Just a pic of a podgy persian getting ready for some posh event, maybe a ball? :3

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20y80d ago
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Posted: Tuesday, 09 March, 2004 @ 10:50 AM

This is one good pic, great job on the colouring...

The overall is great, except I think you exaggerated in highlighting of the bodice part of the dress... Her lip looks more like her tongue. You could fix that by decreasing the highlights and widening the mouth a bit... The ears looks like a little out of place, think in perspective next time...

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