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Just This Once
Just This Once by @twinblades (Tare Fortier)

The sun had just set as Hayley walked down the long strip of storefronts. She paused as something caught her eye. Something marvelous.

There in the lighted display, propped up, was a beautiful sweater, trimmed in fur.

"Oh wow... that's really pretty," Hayley thought to herself. "But I can't get it. Not now anyway. I've spent too much."

The brisk Christmas air numbed the tip of her nose. Shivering just slightly, she turned on her heels to continue on her way. Yet her eyes drew her back.

A coy smile formed on Hayley's frozen lips. "Just this once."

Materials: Open Canvas, Photoshop 6 References: None

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19y153d ago
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Posted: Thursday, 06 January, 2005 @ 09:37 PM

Nice.... I like that you posted a story for the pic as well... and that she really looks as if she wants the sweater in the pic soooo much... it really adds depth to the pic... Great work!

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