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Kim Aberasturi Chua

Nelris
Nelris by @nereid (Kim Aberasturi Chua)

Nelris, another original character. She's from a different "story" and so, despite the resemblance, is not at all affiliated with Celestin^^;

A figuring-out-look type drawing. Stuck a sword in there because, um, she has a sword. No deeper significance in this image at all^^; Wasn't going for any type of background, decided some color was needed...I got sloppy, particularly towards the end. It's a bad habit of mine.

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Posted: Thursday, 23 October, 2003 @ 07:19 AM

Oh, wow, this looks so cool! Nice job, her face turned out really well, and her hair too. I do like how you colored the skin, and the hair, and the spread of those lovely white wings is really cool too. X3 And she has a rather interesting costume. grin

I find the right hand a tad weird though, how does she hold the sword like that? XD You might want to try having her right hand in the same position as her left, so that her sword is hovering above her palm or something; that way her wrist wouldn't look broken. grin Also, her torso seems a bit too long, but that isn't really too noticeable.

All in all good job, you've got the floaty pose down already so... keep goin'! ;D

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