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I wish you were here~
I wish you were here~ by @koneko (Danni D)

........sigh ;_;... Pretty..and sad..-.x and symbolic..I love how the effect for the sketch came out though..

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Posted: Saturday, 19 January, 2002 @ 09:02 PM

squee!! You like Incubus! and new Incubus too! That's a gorgeous song...I'm not sure if it fits the image though...? It's a generally happy song, but this is an awful sad picture...maybe just a section of the song(when he's not saying he's happy ^^;;) might have fit better ^^ I'm not trying to diss you on the lyrics you chose or anything, and I suppose when it comes to the expression of emotions it's up to interpratation, but it's my retarded opinion, I guess ^^; On the picture itsself, I agree with you on the fact that the scribbley-ness does it alot of justice, ^^ I especially like her hand for some reason...The photoshop lightourcing isn't a bad idea, but it might have looked better if you'd toned it down a little or added a little more to it yourself(ie making the dark areas darker with paintbrush) to make it look kinda like she's in a church or in a spotlight or somthing. It might add the illusion of ground. Out of personal taste I would have left it black and white but the picture's very nice overal ^^

Posted: Saturday, 19 January, 2002 @ 09:06 PM

I really like this image. I think its drawn very well, I don't see much wrong with it, except I think that the green-ish "Wish You Were Here" at the bottom of the pic is kind of unneccessary, and sort of goes against the gray dominance in the picture. But the drawing itself is wonderful, even better with the lyrics good job. ^_^

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