The detail in your art is fantastic and your ability to remain true to very complicated character designs like Umi's armor on the right there is impressive. It looks like you could benefit from thinner-tipped markers, but your shading is top notch with the materials you have. Lovely piece here, great job imitating CLAMP's style. Hope to see more from you.

Ooooo very detailed very hard..... @_@

Very nice fanart!!! =D

I love the blue-ness =D I realy like the whive strands of hair, It's used in very appropriate places ^^

The blue really stands out! =D

Very nice!

Although I am sure you are tired of hearing this, the details would benefit from a finer marker tip, but I am amazed with the detail you create with such a broad tip. I must say you handle markers very well. Anyways, great picture!

Umi se da el descanso mas tremendo con Yuriko...ahora falta que mikhail este ahi para que le den de almohadazos..PUM,CHIS,PAM,PLUF!...al suelo..!! nota extra: con este ya serian cuatro comentarios, y con el de Rivverita cinco.....vas mejoraaandooooo....