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Tyler Baxter

from my poinmt of view
from my poinmt of view by @God_of_the_Lochness (Tyler Baxter)

I was reading my book on my lunch a while back and I jut realzed how neat it would be to make a painting as though it was through my eye....I really like how it turned out...the only thing I have to go back and fix are the nails...they are a little too pink...

Have a swell day!^^

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Posted: Sunday, 08 October, 2006 @ 02:21 AM

This is quite original! :3 I'm impressed. I'm guessing you're a blonde? Haha. I agree with the thing about the nails, but, at first I thought they were painted pink, so I didn't notice. I love how you actually wrote in the book, instead of just scribbling. Very nice. The general elbow area looks kind of strange to me, though. The muscle seems to curve oddly, it seems kind of blobby. Like the gravity is off. I think the elbow part should have more of a gentle curve. The tips of the fingers are a bit too long, too, especially the middle finger. Everything else is very well done, though. I love the perspective on that hand! I imagine that's a difficult angle to pull off. I just thought of something, maybe you could make the eyelashes a bit more natural looking? Maybe clump some of them together? It just seems like there's not enough. But, I dunno, even though I look out of my eyes all the time, I can't help much there. X3 Anywho, great job on this. :3 What did you draw it with?

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