*snarl* mah feather?! by @yazzi (Mezz Delf)
This is just a killer (in a bad way) for light sources -NOTHING is warmly yellow toned at night...unless you emit your own light source....hmmm! yup that's it! its a gryphon crossed with a firefly! riiiiiiight I need to look at feathers, night colours etc. I already desaturated the colours in the darn thing and it's still not quuuuite right.
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You know, with a little digital tweaking, though, you could make the light blue-ish. (I could try if you want me to)...
I love your craftsmanship on the patterned feathers. Your digital art is beginning to look a lot less mushy, and I really like that.
My main quibbles: The bright white li'l bits between the snarling griff's beak--I dunno WHAT those are. Drool? Teeth? Whatever they are, they just don't work for me.
The expression of the chars just doesn't come across as intense as they could. I could probably scribble you up a few examples. Pick up Gary Faigin's ARTIST'S GUIDE TO FACIAL EXPRESSIONS and study. STUDY STUDY STUDY.
Finally, cute li'l whitey bird just looks stiff/anatomically off, to me. But I can't really help you there, as I'm not that proficient than birds. Your wings on him are just darling, though.
Nice stuff, dear! Keeeeeep it up! {0-3