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She'na Forga

Balmung
Balmung by @Altooleofree (She'na Forga)

yah this was done in school and i'm hoping to color it sooner or later

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Posted: Tuesday, 02 November, 2004 @ 03:30 PM

BALMUNG!!!!! lol, w00t! just to let u know, it's spelled Legend, not Ledgen, lol :P

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 07:26 AM

~screams~ AAHHHHHH THE WORD!!!!! @.@....i knew that...i really did...

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 02:36 AM

I like this image, it's an interesting action. But I think that the hair looks a little overdone & too complicated. Maybe do more large chunks and less lines I think that it would make your linework even better, and I would love to see this inked and maybe even coloured one day. ^_^ Let me know if you do colour or ink it!!

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 02:37 AM

I forgot to say, I just love the way you did the hand, it's beautifully and skillfully simplified. A skill that is sometimes hard to come by.

Posted: Wednesday, 03 November, 2004 @ 07:27 AM

i know about the hair. It's the one thing i hated about that drawing was his hair but i just ran out of time in my class to finish his hair so i did it really fast. 70 something minutes on that picture bllaa. I'm planning on inking it and shading it. Thanks you the nice comment =)

Posted: Thursday, 08 December, 2005 @ 07:42 AM

I was flattered that you commented on my work, as I've only just put up my pictures and it was nice to receive feedback; thus, I thought I would repay your kindness, especially as you left such a nice comment. ^_^;;;

I like this picture; the fact that it is mostly lines, with little shading, makes it effective in a direct way. The sword looks well-drawn, and I know from experience how difficult hands can be, so well done.

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