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The Marvelous Voyage of Jeft & Co. Pg. 22
The Marvelous Voyage of Jeft & Co. Pg. 22 by @Tedikuma (Teddy Taylor)

This is for a group comic that Brian started with his freinds, including me. ^^ See.. He starts the story, then leaves it hanging for the next person to pick up. We pass the story along. ^^ IT'S SO FUN!!! I've just been handed the comic, so it's my turn. This is my first page, and I'll post the rest of mine when I'm done with them. Kayori gets it next. ^u^ If Brian lets me, I may post the entire thing on my website! Jeft, Paula © 2002 Brian Bear Image © 2002 Teddy Taylor

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Posted: Tuesday, 19 March, 2002 @ 07:00 AM

this is a great picture...just...uh...i dont like how you portrayed paula as some sort of pervert....shes not..

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