@Namari
Katrien van Riet

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Posted: Tuesday, 06 July, 2004 @ 01:26 PM

it looks real and its really cool and awsome great job ....charcoal is hard to work with :p..good luck with your next art thingys .....Kweh O_x !¿?

Posted: Wednesday, 07 July, 2004 @ 08:26 AM

Thanks. I love working with charcoal.

Posted: Tuesday, 06 July, 2004 @ 09:57 PM

This is AMAZING. Simply AMAZING. Your shading is correct, the pose, the texture, it’s all wonderful. I could probably go on for hours about how great this picture is-- it’s so realistic. However, let me make some reverential criticism, after all, where is an artist, if all they receive is praise? One: The right eye seems somewhat larger then the left, although I’m guessing that just has to do with location and proportion and all that other jazz. Two: The shading on the concave skin in the corner of her left eye seems too darkly shaded, and makes it stand out slightly. Other then these things, I really can’t find any other flaw. Great job, I’m going to check out the rest of your work now.

Posted: Wednesday, 07 July, 2004 @ 08:29 AM

Thankyou. I already fixed the drawing so I can't change it anymore, but I'll keep the tips in mind for my other drawings!

Posted: Thursday, 22 July, 2004 @ 10:08 AM

Great job! Considering how hard it is detailing with charcoals i have a question: How large is original?

Posted: Thursday, 22 July, 2004 @ 12:57 PM

Thanks. The original is A4 size.

Posted: Saturday, 31 July, 2004 @ 04:02 PM

Cool! The heavy shadows really bring out the ear.

Posted: Saturday, 31 July, 2004 @ 05:38 PM

Thankyou! It means a lot to me that you say that, I meant the ear to be distracting although many people tell me it is too light. :)

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