@Merenwen
Sara Patterson

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This is the line art for Pulu. As you can see it has some problems that need to be adressed. Artwork © Copyright 2003 Sara Patterson

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20y356d ago
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Posted: Tuesday, 03 June, 2003 @ 10:13 PM

How fascinating! It's so neat to see her in her raw sketch form! You really did blend all the details in, so that it looked natural. But I dig the sketch. You take your time...ONE day, Sara, I'm going to write Pulu's story. One day...

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