Nice! You did a very good job on the hair and the jacket, especially--it looks so shiny! The shading on the face is a little off, but I think that's because you've done the same thing I used to do. See, where the big white spot in the eye is--that indicates the direction the light is coming from. The way you've shaded makes the shadows seem to be coming from that direction, instead. Pay attention when you're coloring to the light in the eyes, kind of 'draw' imaginary lines of light going in that direction. Am I making sense? I dunno cause I'm slightly ill and rather dizzy. Oh well! Keep up the CGing, this is way better than my first attempt!