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Sara Patterson

Wind Beneath My Wings
Wind Beneath My Wings by @Merenwen (Sara Patterson)

The writing on the page translates to It must have been cold there in my shadow, To never have sunlight on your face you were content to let me shine...thats your way you always walked a step behind Did you ever know that you're my hero Kibito? I put the kibito part in cause it fit. But the words are lyrics from Wind beneath my wings by Bette Midler. give it a listen to ;)

So mor or less its hsin and his diary...okay? Im sorry it looks rushed....:(

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21y121d ago
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Posted: Friday, 24 January, 2003 @ 08:53 AM

Nice. The colouring-style is beautiful. And I like how you drew it, rather realistically. His feet are cute! Awesome ...

Posted: Thursday, 06 February, 2003 @ 06:54 PM

Wow. It still floors me that you're so drawn to Shin and Kibito. What drew you to them? This is an awesome theme and an awesome picture. It's so appropriate, I think, for their friendship. Kibito is such the silent supporter, and I can see Shin taking a moment to really appreciate all he's done for him.

His clothes - again, no one could make it work like you. You're so brave with the colors you choose - and yet they work, every time. The orange-rust of his pants don't clash with the purples hues of his skin, because you're just that good!

You did a great job at making him look deep in thought, too. You capture emotion SO well in your drawings. SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SOSOSOSOSOSO WELL!

I feel it when I look at your stuff. It's more than just pleasing to the eye. It's food for my emotions, because each pic has a story behind it. One you don't even have to spell out.

Love it.

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