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Poetry Reading
Poetry Reading by @invader_bast (Jordan Gregory)

I randomly decided to do a Moulin Vert scene. XD From AF's fic, Moulin Vert! :] I like this very much, yes I DO!

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Posted: Thursday, 23 December, 2004 @ 02:46 PM

XD That's so funny! Your tail totally rocks. u.u It's got neat neat textures and your pose is awesome, too. I love how the whole thing is greeeeeeeeeen in the background instead of red. 8] .... green is not a color conducive to passion at ALL! XD It makes the picture seem light and innocent and like you really DO just want poetry.

But no. u.u That much green... lust-killer fer sure. Colors just aren't arbitrary! You need red!

Hmm.. o.o ... it's so ironic that everybody except me is all lustful after GREEN PEOPLE and I'm totally NOT lustful after RED PRIESTS... yes, that is irony for you. Then again, those colors aren't in copious amounts.. just skin or hair... that quickly gives way to the influence of surrounding colors... rambles

Posted: Thursday, 23 December, 2004 @ 04:44 PM

9.9; Dude... The monkey at the Moulin Vert is SUPPOSED to be green. XD

Posted: Friday, 24 December, 2004 @ 09:58 AM

Oh I know that! :D But it still doesn't work artistically. now begins to ponder if there IS a way to make it work artistically or even in theory

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