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Kii Takaishi

Art Trade - Peekaboo!
Art Trade - Peekaboo! by @kiikii_sempai (Kii Takaishi)

My half of an art trade done with Sa-Tina at deviantart. Her character, done in OC 3.

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Posted: Sunday, 29 August, 2004 @ 07:34 PM

Really nice work with the angle. The legs, especially are really well proportioned, jointed, and forshortened :)

You've got some really nice, crisp shading going on. The fur in the tail loses some of that, I think...if you're interested in going back, you might consider reworking that a bit.

Nice facial structure. I like the shading on her chin a lot :).

I could go into color scheme, but that would just be nit picking based on personal opinion, and I know how annoying that is :P

Overall a really nicely done character portrait :)

Posted: Monday, 06 September, 2004 @ 11:25 AM

Great angle. You definitely have a grasp of perspective when you can pull off a pose like this as successfully as you did. Love the shading in the hair, too, it really looks fluffy. Heck, the shading all around is nicely done. The background's a little flat, but the focus of the picture is wonderful. Nice work.

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