wow,wow!! your background making in this image is phenomenal!! almost, I´m agreed with Cee, you must work in the face and the body proportions..good pencil shade skills:)
After the battle by @riverita (Gina Rivera)
This is just something I started drawing when I had a day off... I wanted to draw a woman pirate, but this came out instead in the end.
Esto es sólo algo que empecé cuando tuve un día libre... En principio quería dibujar una mujer pirata... pero al final salió esto :D
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Great picture.^_^ The shading and proportions on her are very well done.
A few things...I would maybe work on her face, boobs, and the way the background flows. The face seems to lack detail and expression. The rest of the body is amazing and the shading adds a lot of depth, but on the face it seems like the eyes could match better and the eyebrows and mouth tilt up at a sharp angle...Her ear looks sort of off, too.
The next thing is her right breast looks very lopsided and doesn't match with the other one.
The last thing is that I don't like how the background is so contrasted...The grayness of the background seems to overshadow the gray picture...Maybe that's just personal preference, though. Hm, actually, that hand might be a little small...I know it's in a fist, but I think it would be a tad bigger...For hands I usually compare them to the size of the face for reference, so maybe that will help you, too.^_^
All in all, I love your drawing. You added a ton of detail, all of the shading is done exquisitely, and for the most part the proportions are done really well. Great job!!