Thank ya! No, Al's eyes aren't supposed to be 2 different colors my scanner's kinda wacko laughs it does weird things like that sometimes. And you're the first person to say you like his shirt's logo..rock on for that lol.
As for Rose- yeah, she does look awfully slender, her torso IS a bit long, I'll admit that much- however, if you look again, her hands are NOT at the same level. I made them accordingly- the one with the deeper bend in the arm is up higher than the other one, not level...
And as far as inking goes- i've been practicing! ^_^ I'm starting to think i've got the hang of it...hehe. Thanks for the comments!
Those are some stylin' pjs! I like them a lot. Great design on the clothing and characters both. The details, like the logo on his shirt, really add so much to an image. Are his eyes two different colors? It appears to be from this angle. Nice.
I really like her pose, but her arms and torso appear to be really, super long. Even though she seems to be drawn with the tall, thin legs of a shoujo character, I think it's a little too long. Also, considering the bend is deeper in one arm than the other, the hands shouldn't be at the same level.
You've got good inking skills. It looks particularly cool in the way you ink the shadows. Nice!