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Daisy Hunt

Catacombs Fall
Catacombs Fall by @Lucky_Ladybug66 (Daisy Hunt)

From my fic The Adventure of the Underground Crypt. Fakir was pulled into the catacombs under the library by a mysterious force. He fell down the stairs and struck his head. Autor is trying in vain to revive him.

Fakir's hand is laying limp on the bottom stair. And the tiles and the tunnels gave me such a headache, as you can see from all the eraser marks! But I love the third tunnel so hard. The differing patterns I was basing on memories of the way the floor tiles changed from room to room in our old house, but I don't think that's an accurate portrayal of the library's tiles. But I wasn't up for erasing the whole floor and trying again!

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