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Beneath-the-moon-so-blue
Beneath-the-moon-so-blue by @Velasa (Velasa Akutenshi)

This is one of my namek boys, Scythe. It started out with a background, a sunset, and his big empty expance of cloak blowing in the wind.... I wanted to do something with it, but I didnt know what.

And then the poem started flowing out.

I'm sorry about it being incomprehensible- for every fold in the cloak, the words world branch off into new line, and on and on and on... It's simply a medley of his silent isolation, the self-imposed distance that he can't break, the walls have grown too strong in the decades, possibly centuries, they've stood....

At a glance, I can make out this...... "I stand beneath the moon so blue- the night is dark and you are too- as am I- under the moon so blue- " and then it branches off in to three seperate lines and I loose all track of it....

But they ARE all words, and they are all the continuing poem. I didn't start writing jibberish just to fill it. Someday i'll take the time to write it out line by line... but not now.

Straight pen sketch. I can't remember how many ballpoints were killed in the making of this image.

Sorry about the size of the file. I thought this one deserved it ^^

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