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Akiva Papa

Katakomben
Katakomben by @akivpapa (Akiva Papa)

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Die Katakomben der Unsterblichkeit sind uns nicht offen
Der Kranz der Verträglichkeit
Brüchig
Der Kahn löchrig
Der Übermut zu groß
Die Qual der Unendlichkeit
ist eine Ahnung
Hingebungsvoll erwartet
Grandios im Wahn
Vergeblich im Vergessen
Last erlöst Lust
Die Kinder der Kammern
sprechen ihren Namen nicht aus

Artwork © Copyright 2002 Akiva Papa

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