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Erin Crouse

Maddness
Maddness by @Ravwrin (Erin Crouse)

Maddness

Spinning, swirling mass. Chaos, noise, whirling blurs. Round and round, about and about. Never stops, madness, talking, it's so loud in here. Please. Make it stop, make it stop! No more, too much, can't take it, must have release, some sort of silence, can I make it, can I take it? So much, can't hang on anymore. Until. That one last thing that ever truly keeps me sane appears, and that tells me it's alright until the next day, when it all starts all over again and you're still there, and you make it alright again.

           By:  music_l0ver aka Traci Brown

One day I wanted to draw something that was inspired by something else. I knew a community on Livejournal that was created by a friend and there were many poems there. I looked through them and couldn't find the one I really wanted. That is until I came upon one done by my girlfriend. It was titled Maddness. I had read it once then read it again and reread it once more and made up my mind.

This is my take on the poem in picture form. It took me a long time, trust me on that one. The basic art was drawn on paper, then outlined with pen, outlined on computer and finally I colored it on computer. I know I could have done much better but this is what you've got.
I personally love this peice because of all the time and effort I put into it.

Traci, think of it as a present for going off to college.

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